Showing posts with label Rachel Bateman. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Rachel Bateman. Show all posts

June 05, 2010

Beach Scene Blogfest

Today marks my first time participating in a blogfest, Rachel Bateman's Beach Scene Blogfest. Check out Rachel's entry, along with the master list, here. I could have used a scene from my WiP, but I wanted to try something new instead (and I may be slightly overprotective of my MS). Enjoy, and don't forget to tell me what you think in the comments.



The Missing Suit

Greenlee plunked her forehead against the steering wheel, hands spread on the hot dash as she idled at the red light. She looked left and right at narrow, sandy streets packed with cars and pedestrians. "We’re never going to find a spot."

"Chill," Jess said, flicking a cigarette butt out the window as the light turned and Greenlee hit the gas. "We'll find something. Try further down; it's usually empty towards 5th Street."

Greenlee shook her head. "The beach on Memorial Day weekend – what a total mistake." She adjusted the thick black strap sliding down her upper arm. "I hate this stupid bathing suit." She snapped the other strap higher up her shoulder.

Jess frowned. "I thought you just bought it? And wasn’t it sea foam green or something?"

Greenlee glanced down at the slightly oversized black Lycra one-piece. “Sea green. And I don’t typically make it a habit to dress like an old lady. This is Aunt Sarah’s suit for when she comes to the house to swim.”

Jess raised her eyebrows. “So where’s your new suit?”

Greenlee shrugged. “Couldn’t find it. Could’ve sworn I put it in my top drawer last week. Of course, Mom and Bianca swore they hadn’t seen it.” She stopped short with a screech of her tires. A tourist, easily identifiable by her cheesy tropical sundress, popped the trunk of a parked car. Greenlee turned her blinker on.

Prime beach-side parking. Maybe the day wasn’t a wash after all.

A car behind them beeped. Greenlee waved her arm out the window. “Go around, go around!” The tropical tourist pulled a stroller from the trunk, closed it, and left. Greenlee sighed. “Right.”

She pressed the gas, watching the woman wistfully in the rearview mirror. At this point she’d be grateful for a spot that wasn’t a mile from the boardwalk.

Jess gasped. “Greens!”

Greenlee redirected her eyes to the road. A couple ambled across Atlantic Boulevard, hand-in-hand, oblivious to the car hurtling towards them. Greenlee braked hard. The seatbelt jerked tight across her chest and dug into her breast bone.

She skidded to a stop just short of the couple. The girl extended her hands in a vain attempt to protect herself.  The skidding car hit her with enough force to knock her off balance.  She landed on her butt.

Greenlee threw the car into park. "I hate tourists! They flock here every flippin’ summer and take up all the tables at Moody's and throw trash everywhere, and, and –"

"Jaywalk?" Jess said, lighting a cigarette to busy her shaking hands. She sat up straight, her usually lazy lids wide. "Maybe. But those are no tourists."

Greenlee did a double take. The girl wore a sequined, sea green bikini top and a pair of tight white shorts. Greenlee got out and walked around the front of the car. “Bianca!"

As an afterthought she added, "Are you okay?"

Bianca jumped up and brushed bits of asphalt from her bloody palms. “Greenlee! You nearly killed me!”

Bianca noticed Jess hanging out the passenger’s window, a cigarette dangling from her lips.  Her expression hardened.

Jess’s eyes flicked from Bianca's stubborn expression to her own boyfriend’s sheepish one. “Funny seeing you here, Christopher. You’re a long way from – where was it you were supposedly going this weekend? – Myrtle Beach?"

She jerked her chin toward Bianca. "Check it out, Greens. Looks like Christopher found your bathing suit."

April 26, 2010

When you're stuck

Hope everyone had an awesome weekend. I had a wonderful birthday fiesta, courtesy of Bear and complete with nacho bar (the easiest, tastiest, least expensive way to feed a lot of people that I've ever come across). We were even going to get a piƱata, but it was supposed to storm.

Bear got me a Bamboo Fun drawing/writing tablet for my birthday, and let me tell you - it is way more fun AND difficult than I could have imagined. It will definitely take some practice to get used to the pen. In the next few weeks I'll have to post a cartoon created with my Fun instead of hand-drawing and photographing like I normally do (since I don't have a scanner - technology FAIL, I know). Until then, I've included a few simple graphics I created with the Bamboo in this post (except for the one below, obviously).

One of the few things that works seamlessly with Vista.

In less awesome news, I am totally, utterly, absolutely stuck on one chapter.

Imagine shrieky horror movie music here (eeeek, eeeek, eeeek):


Chapter 13.

I've never been caught up on lucky and unlucky numbers, but boy, oh boy - this chapter could change my mind! The issue in the chapter doesn't have any major bearing on the rest of the book, so it hasn't stopped me from continuing to edit everything after it, but there is a palpable storm cloud hanging over this chapter.

I want it resolved. I want it fixed.

I have moved on, editing Chs. 14, 15, 16, etc., but every once in a while I go back and waste hours trying to fix it. Honestly, nothing in the chapter seems right. Not the writing. Not the plot. Not the characters. You know when you watch a video online and it hasn't buffered properly and it's all jerky? Yeah, that's this chapter. So I try to fix it, and then I get discouraged, and I say my book sucks, that I'll never be published, and I should never have started this.

I don't feel like that for long, of course, or I would have already quit. But still. Chapter 13? Total storm cloud on my otherwise pristine manuscript-horizon.


Do you have a problem chapter like my Ch. 13? If so, what do/did you do to resolve the problem?

PS - Rachel Bateman is giving away signed copies of AS YOU WISH, THE FOREST OF HANDS AND TEETH, and THE SECRET YEAR. Be sure to enter her contest by 4/30!

March 23, 2010

My first blog award! Kiersten's cover!

You like me! You really like me!


At least, Rachel Bateman does! Today Rachel bestowed me with the Awesomesauce Award for Displaying Awesomeness on a Regular Basis.

The rules for the award are:

If you get sauced, define awesome and name 8 people who fit that definition. You don't have to pass the award on if you don't want to, since it's just for fun.

Rachel's definition of AWESOME is:
MY definition of AWESOME is:
Anyone who makes me laugh, supports me, understands my bizarre humor, and is just generally, er…awesome!

Anyone whose blog I enjoy reading, who gives back to the writing community through blogging advice/expertise, supports/encourages me, or loves HARRY POTTER. You are AWESOME!
1.] Heidi Rebecca always has something interesting to say, has traveled the world, and probably loves HARRY POTTER more than I do.
 
2.] Debbie Barr is fearlessly honest in portraying the ups and downs of the writing process. She also sells awesome RSS and Facebook earrings on Etsy!
 
3.] YA Highway for giving me great topics to write about every week with Road Trip Wednesdays.
 
4.] Elana Johnson for being an uber-helpful, super-conscientious blogger. I don't know how you do it all, Elana, but I'm glad you do!
 
5.] Michelle McLean hosted a contest for which I won silver medalist, and thanks to she and her friends Christine Fonseca, Suzette Saxton, Bethany Wiggins, Cole Gibsen, Leah Clifford, and Lisa Amowitz,  my query is all shiny and (dare I say?) awesome before I've even finished my edits.
 
6.] Kirsten Hubbard for her insightful blog and baby animal of the week feature (Ligers! Tiglons! Oh my!).
 
7.] Rachel Bateman for recognizing my blog with this award and for introducing me to Carrie Ryan's work. Thank you, Rachel!
 
8.] My family, because NO ONE is more awesome than they are!
 
Speaking of awesomeness, Kiersten White revealed the cover for her debut novel PARANORMALCY yesterday. The cover is a perfect balance of whimsy (the dress) and mystery (why is she in a thunderstorm in a field in that dress?), don't you think? This is definitely the kind of book I'd pick up based solely on its cover. 
 
September 21, people! September 21!
 
Make sure to stop by Kiersten's blog to congratulate her.

Finally, Beth Revis is hosting a MONUMENTAL contest to celebrate her recent book deal. Find out more about the contest and enter here!

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